However there is only one change I can offer, that is a change of colour to a blue or a nice green, maybe even a feature wall. My room has lots of colour in it. The theme of my bedroom is simply my favourite things. There are multi-coloured paper butterflies scattered all over the pale purple walls, swarming in corners and perching on the edges of family photographs. Sharp fallen off deer antlers just around the corner on top of the moveable closet a prize off snooping around while hunting. Room Metaphors and Similes Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different Style of the room is mine and only mine if anyone can match my unique style they all mash up together to make the bedroom mine. Good story I enjoyed reading it. I have massive two windows that take up almost all of the wall. The size of my room is around 3x4M and is small but very warm to sit in. I like spending time in my room, because I like having my own space and its a good place to be by myself. But over all, I like my room. I have a modern wooden desk for school work. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. A stout red beanbag accommodates a spot near the middle of the room. Like I do my homework on my desk. Beneath the mountain is a variety of my calves running in the evening sun. With the windows closed it is a musty un-fresh smell and quite hot. Then your eyes are carried to my dark coloured wooden dresser underneath the back window to the left. So try using better descriptive words. The layout of my room is great and I really like it. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. I LOVE THE DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF THE THINGS YOU CAN SEE OUT YOUR WINDOW. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. The mirror in my room is attached to my sister's dresser, around the edges of it has stickers that are half pulled off. It lies to the left of the monitor on the desk and is covered with old homework and empty cups. You also have great descriptive words to help visualize. I give you a 4. There are so many aspects of my bed I love but my favorite one would have to how comfortable it is. The furniture in my room is quite tight. One of my most treasured items in my bedroom is a large canvas painting of a multi coloured elephant that sits above my pink beanbag. My bed is quite low to the ground. On my desk is my blue lamp, my pink polaroid camera and my mini drawers. How my bedroom looks? My wardrobe is unbelievably messy because theres so much stuff I have to fit in it, because my room is small compared to all the other rooms. I have a black bed side table that is woodin and I have a plastic clock, then I have a grey alarm clock that I really dislike because it wakes me up and I don't like getting up. Beside my bed is a little white bedside table housing a wide variety of items mainly things I couldnt be bothered to put away. Now heres why everything is where it is, so both king single beds are right up against the creamy walls because well I dont really enjoy having my annoying sister in my room but mum says she has to so I tried to keep us as far apart as possible. I think that as soon as I was reading the first paragraph it was full of punctuation's. My carpet is quite old and has some stains on it from the previous, but most of my bed covers those stains.Some of my clothes are squashed up in my small drawers and most of good clothes are in my wardrobe. Your lucky that it's big haha 4. My layout has nowhere to move, but I love it the way it is. The next best thing about my bedroom is the accessories that make the room mine. Nice work Kaia! I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. There might even be a ball stuck between the TV and wall. In my bed room the layout, cleanliness, colors and accessories are the most important things that makes my bedroom that makes it mine. I really love my bedroom, its completely designed by me and thats why I love it. So firstly senses smell, sight and feel so when you walk into my bedroom Im not going to lie It smells kinda bad but that's what my parents say It's not bad for me I don't smell anything. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. Well done. Your next step is to improve your grammar and punctuation. Which is what I did that day. The floor in my room is medium sized. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. Mine is to the right of the door and facing it, whereas Sams is directly in front of the door facing towards it too. All you can see is the drive way and trees. Curtains and carpet are the same grey colour, but the carpet is so soft you could sleep on it. So I would like to describe to you my own little world. Most of the times it has clothes that cover the floor. I wonder what you would change about it if you had the chance too? Now I will tell you about the sight, first I will tell you about the pictures and posters, on top of my duchess there is a is a drawing about what the future would look like, I drew in year 5 my mum thought it was a nice drawing so she framed it. My bedroom is down the small hallway and to the right. Interesting imagination Teatukura. The grey carpet is soft and oddly soothing underfoot. My most favorite piece of furniture in my room is most definitely my bed because its where I spend most of my time and when you spend time with something like that for that long you're sure to end up getting attached to it, but anyway my bed is my favorite thing in my room because its warm when I want warm and cool when I want cool and plus its majorly comfy. On the other side a white storage couch with a picnic basket design, inside are teddy bears that had been given to me over the years and have sentimental value. You can sign in to vote the answer. Somehow it is always warm with the right temperature. The biggest most horrifically untidy thing about my room is the floor. My walls are blue on the bottom with white as the top of the wall and for the roof. The darkness at specific times, so as I said it can get dark fast, I have to use my lighting module just to make it look like its still daylight, it gets annoying sometimes, you just got home and you go in your room and you cant find the light (By the way my hallway light is a sensor light). I hop into my cosy bed. But it could be neater and all the belongings could be organised. Opposite the set of drawers is my build in wardrobe with my blue and red triangle patterned shelves.Also right in front of you as you walk in there is my big white window which is the main source of light. THOMASS BEDROOM In the wardrobe there are white racks the store blankets, and the walls are brown. The location of my bed is in a usual place, well that's at least what I think, it's in a corner, yeah, my draws seem to be the second weirdest placement they're placed directly beside my bed like, on the edge of my bed, and then there is my bedside table, it's not even a bedside table its a bed end table, now I want to tell you some things that really are in my bedroom, firstly there's a bath, yes a bathtub is in my bedroom you have to a really dumb builder to put the bathtub in a bedroom, secondly a window to nowhere there is a window in my wardrobe, that has just left me speechless. Feed-forward - You had nouns but boring adjectives 'A computer that is big and fun' add more description to it 'Speakers that are loud' it's too boring be more interesting. Lv 7. The colours in my room are all colours I love and are comfortable in and around. Your writing paints a picture in the readers mind and leaves them feeling like they actually just physically walked around it! No one can get in except for me. Well structured paragraphs and a few funny jokes too. And I don't have to worry about other siblings entering my space. R5, It is a brilliant essay. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. I have two paintings in my room, one of a cat with glasses on and one of two dogs in a mug (these still need to be put up). I liked how you added a lot of description, like about the wall paper. What storms then shook the ocean of my sleep. I have modern tropical theme with orange and blue striped sheets with a blue duva. I wouldnt say that I have a colour theme in my room but if I had to say what colours stood out to me I would say all shades of blue, pink and green. Finally, the coldness, if its snowing that cup of water is frozen almost solid, I had to use three blankets those mourning, it gets really chilly. A strange smell like no other. A few more sensory descriptions of your room maybe but we would happily rate you 4+. You could add more information on what each paragraph was. But there are some things that I would really like to change like my bed would be better if it was double size and maybe a little bit of colour on my walls would make it much better. I like the layout, colors, furniture and the style it has a red feature wall (my favorite color). You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. I have recently changed around my room. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. But the thing I love the most about my bedroom is is the fact that it is mine. Posted on: dinsdag,3 let me know your thoughts? -3, Brody, I like your writing. I have a chair that is very sturdy but comfortable and a table which is birch with white markings and has a curve on the end. Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. The furniture is really comfy and I really like it. Only to sleep and occasionally use for Gaming, because my room is positioned at the end of the house, opposite to the end that the T.V is. Most of my books are stacked up into one of my cubby hole shelves. In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. People who love the outdoors might feel most at ease and happy when theyre outside in the forest. I really like the words you have used to describe your story like Its lovely to see the colour of your carpet again, Just a wee reminder please unpack your rugby bag before it starts waffling out the door!! Accessories in my room are very special to me. 3, You did spell some difficult words. Most of the ideas are elaborated equally. The underfloor heating is the main source of heat in our house. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. I have enjoyed reading this and laughed a few times at how accurate your description is. All kinds of blue from baby blue to electric blue to sky blue - there is a lot of blue. I would also like change the style of my bedroom, mostly the size. The carpet in my room is the newest and cleanest. "one of them is a full size katana", Great story, the vocabulary was good and very descriptive. My room has a lot of sport contents. I have been in your room but I think you have to clean your room before a gest gets there a ha ha 4. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. When you walk in, on the left is a window and a desk, straight forward is a gigantic, wide window and to the right is my bed, wardrobe and heater. Christina Moses Weight Loss, 3+. You describe it very well, you could visualize yourself in your room. In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! I would give you a 3. You can see the green and purple lettuce growing in the sauna like glass house and the drenched clothes hanging on the washing line. Penultimate par5agraph the full stop at the end goes inside of the brackets. I love the vibrant colours and all my family photos stuck on my wardrobe and how much room I have to store clothes etc. My room is the perfect size for all my things and for me and thats how I like it. I did the wrong thing. Secondly call of duty gaming gear,(That's what I like to call it) such as posters and other related gaming gear, heres a list of the gear that I have, I have a whole load of PlayStation accessories and computer accessories like a mouse that lights up saying call of duty, my keyboard does the almost exact same thing instead it lights up, c, a, l flashes, o, f, d, u, t and y my PlayStation is not so great all it has is a sticker of call of duty on it. There is smelly rugby gear, warm ski gear and dirty clothes all over the floor. I'd like to see your room Alex because of the rustic theme and colours. A good descriptive story. Your description was enjoyable to read. to the right of that is a small toy box filled to the brim and next to it there is a big wardrobe that I never use. Opposite my window is my cupboard. It might not seem like your average 13 year old bedroom because really this bedroom wasn't even for me, it was meant to be a spare room. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. Looking a bit further up you can see a sky light, the plastic that covers it from the reflective tube in the attic isnt fastened properly so if somebody slams a door somewhere it vibrates and makes such a commotion. All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. I have an adorable tiger painting above my bed. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. MY BEDROOM! The Ideas are relevant but I would like to see more elaborated Ideas in the text. the room was smelly like dirty socks. Alexs bedroom My animal sketches hanging on my wall and blowing in a winter breeze were only done in black and white. There was a couple of spelling mistakes though. They might also have filing cabinets and stacks of work-related folders lying around. Your punctuation was good. Near where this wall joins the feature wall there is another painting. Ruebens bedroom you also need to indent your paragraphs. One of the styles of my bedroom is wood because most of the room is made of it and it looks really cool too. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. ALYSSAS BEDROOM Sometimes the temperature goes up and sometimes goes right down. Finally I have color so most of my room is a cream color because my walls and roof it that color. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. My room has two windows, one facing south, the other west. Teatukuras bedroom You just need to open up your curtains more to get the better light. MY BEDROOM. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. But probably my biggest color is black or white as I have quite a few drawers that are black and white. The background color of my wall is light sea blue. The tv, my tv is a black 32 inch philips tv which is about 9 years old but It's still works good. My bedside table is cream with a draw that is woven and basket like. I need to describe a bedroom using metaphors and iam completely lost i cant think of anything so if you could help i would really appreciate it! When I walk into my bedroom I always love that feeling when it is so so warm that you just lay there and forget about everything. Smell and quite hot ( my favorite one would have to how comfortable is. 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